The line graph gives information about the number of Iranian, Greek and Turkish students who enrolled at Sheffield University between 2005 and 2009.

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, and Turkey at Sheffield University between 2005 and 2000.

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the number of international

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from

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and Turkey rocketed over the given period, learners from Greece dwindled. Looking at the graph in more detail,

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students

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admitted at Sheffield University

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the highest at 180 in 2005,

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figure experienced a downward trend until 2007 at about 70. Noticeably, it plateaued at

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level for a year before plunging to above 40 in 2009.

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and Turkish international

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underwent a similar upward trend. The former began at approximately 40 in 2005

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it grew considerably to a whopping 160 in 2009. The latter,

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, outpaced

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in 2007 at above 80 and continued to grow to reach just above 120

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of the given period.