The line graph gives information about the number of Iranian, Greek and Turkish students who enrolled at Sheffield University between 2005 and 2009.
The given line graph depicts the enrolees from
Iran
, Greek
, and Turkey at Sheffield University between 2005 and 2000.
Correct your spelling
Greece
Overall
, while
the number of international students
from Iran
and Turkey rocketed over the given period, learners from Greece dwindled.
Looking at the graph in more detail, although
greek
Capitalize word
Greek
students
admitted at Sheffield University begun
the highest at 180 in 2005, Wrong verb form
began
this
figure experienced a downward trend until 2007 at about 70. Noticeably, it plateaued at this
level for a year before plunging to above 40 in 2009.
On the other hand
, Iran
and Turkish international students
underwent a similar upward trend. The former began at approximately 40 in 2005 when
it grew considerably to a whopping 160 in 2009. The latter, Correct word choice
and
however
, outpaced students
from Iran
in 2007 at above 80 and continued to grow to reach just above 120 at the end
of the given period.Submitted by amotoh10 on
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