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I remember that since I was a child, I have had a bad memory rather than my peers. A good example of it would be, in all stages of my whole life, in other words, from childhood to adulthood I cannot remember many events and scenes. In fact, not only do I have a good memory, but
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I have some problems and one of them is that I think during my life, I don’t have had
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regime and nutrition. I really like being in
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, because it is believed that a good memory has many benefits. And I am really eager to know what is the
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what programs and skills will be taught. Since I am a poor person, I want to know what is the tuition for the
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Engage more directly with the topic by clearly outlining how you plan to improve your memory or your expectations from the memory course.
coherence and cohesion
Include an introduction and conclusion to frame your essay and provide a clear structure
coherence and cohesion
Use connecting words and phrases to help your ideas flow more smoothly from one to the next, improving the readability of your text
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Try to stay focused on how the memory course might address your stated needs and potentially improve your situation
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Give more detailed information or examples specifically related to the Memory Course to strengthen your main points
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You shared a personal story to illustrate your points, adding a relatable aspect to your essay
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You've displayed an eagerness to learn and improve, which is a positive tone for such an essay

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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