The table shows price of a cup of coffee in six cities in Australia in 2010 and 2014.

The table shows price of a cup of coffee in six cities in Australia in 2010 and 2014.
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The table illustrates the cost of coffee
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its changes in six states of
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Australia including the Perth, Brisbane, Canberra, Adelaide,
Melbourne
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, and Sydney in the years 2010 and 2014.
Overall
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, all these prices were increased over four years,
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, the growth was much higher in
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Melbourne
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and Sydney. By way of comparison, the amount of money that each cup cost significantly was grown in the cities
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as
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Melbourne
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, Sydney, and Brisbane. Having by far the most changes,
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Melbourne
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customers spent $3.45 in the year 2014
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it had been $3.15 in 2010.
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,
Sedney
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Sydney
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rate of 8.1% raise was the second province in the row of the substantial price transformation.
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, Canberra and Adelaide had the lowest percentage of increase. Having 4.5 % clime in the costs, Canberra went from $3.35 to $3.50 ,
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Adelaide
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price of one cup of coffee reached $3.45 after four years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words melbourne with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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