Some people think that robots are important for humankind's future development. Others think that robots have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, digital technologies have become more sophisticated in human society.
Hence
, it is argued that
robots
are significant for community development, others consider that they bring detrimental effects to
people
. We will discuss both views which are elucidated in the following paragraphs. Looking more closely at the first view, there are several supportive points for it.
For instance
, these remarkable
robots
can be able to do multitasking from not only simple technical, household and business work to
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tasks that
people
can not handle.
Moreover
,
robots
play a vital role in hospitals where they can carry out some services urgently,
such
as for a crucial operation or other various tasks at the same time by controlling time management.
On the other hand
, these electronic devices like
people
have led to adverse impacts on human beings. One of the most destructive cases of utilizing
robots
is spoiling
people
's
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, especially among youth. It may cause less productivity
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their work and laziness which will
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serious problems
such
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.
Besides
that, the tasks that are being accomplished by
robots
, which resulted in a considerable increase in unemployment among
people
. It is possible to give rise to stealing and corruption in society.
To sum up
, taking everything into consideration, I tend to believe that
although
there have been beneficial outcomes to
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robots
in
people
's lives in the future, there should be limitations to
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robots
according to
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needs and demands in order to decrease the number of unemployed
people
and avoid some crimes among society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • automation
  • productivity
  • efficiency
  • surgical robots
  • assembly lines
  • job displacement
  • ethical considerations
  • privacy issues
  • socioeconomic disparities
  • re-skilling
  • human welfare
  • surveillance robots
  • disaster recovery missions
  • human touch
  • social bonding
  • advancements in healthcare
  • regulation
  • ethical AI
  • safeguards
  • manufacturing speed
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