In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, people no longer die early all

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the world, the

aged

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are

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increasing.

While

some individuals believe

this

trend causes

troubles

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for the

government

, others argue that it is beneficial to the community. Personally, the profits are minimal when compared to its cons. There could be reasons for which having a more aged population

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a financial burden to the management, and a convincing one is that

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have to provide support for their basic needs like proper healthcare.

Similarly

, most of them monthly receive retirement

pension

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.

Therefore

, when we have a large number of sick old people in society, the responsibility of the

government

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increases.

For instance

, the majority of old age which will always use the health insurance scheme

that is

catered for by the executives.

Consequently

, the

government

spends plenty of money on

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insurances

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.

Hence

, more number of graybeard is a huge economic burden to the

government

.

However

, elders

also

have a positive influence on society, they can participate in some simple social volunteer activities which have a positive impact on building a better society. Volunteer activities involve maintaining community hygiene and supervising social security. But often fewer seniors actually assist

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than expected. Research in China

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shown that the elders have a high willingness to attend it, with more than 70% of them would like to join.

However

,

due to

restrictions on participation channels,

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capabilities, the final percentage of participants is only about 40%. In conclusion, from my point of view

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the merits of having aged people in our countries overweight its weak

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. Because even though they can help social construction, they impose an economic burden

that is

difficult for the

government

to handle.