Some people think that study of history is little use to us.others believe that studying history helps us to know the present. discuss both the viewpoints and give your own opinion

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that getting a knowledge of
history
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the present
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believe that it is not
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useful for us. In
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discussing
both views and discuss in favour of the benefits
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history
.
To begin
with ,
history
is one of the
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that act as a connection between the ancient time and the present. Nowadays
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a lot
of people travel to different parts of the country and explore
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themselves
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the
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new places. Lots of historical places can be found which carry some
history
behind it.
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about
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history
can help the individual to explore and know about the historical importance of
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monuments or ancient buildings.
For example
; Golden Temple is one of the most popular tourist
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places
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in India . It
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as
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a tourist attraction but
also
related to the religion. Studying
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its
history
can help the tourist to explore it and understand the reason behind its construction and
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maintenance
.
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to
this
, the next generation would be able to value and worship the historical places that
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been left by their ancestors and cause the
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sacrifice
of their life behind it. On the other side, there has been a tremendous change in the educational sector that not only
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the
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history
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also
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different
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of curriculum
activity
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which are mostly
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preferred
by the students.
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, people try to focus
over
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the sectors that include engineering ,
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rather
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being eager to know about
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historical events and their studies. It is often found to be a boring area for them to focus
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the
imaginery
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imaginary
events. In recent research , it has been seen that most
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people prefer to buy
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books , articles related to the story ,
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and comedies rather
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prefer to go for
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books that carry
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knowledge about
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history
.
To conclude
,
althought
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although
history
is one of the
platform
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which help us to be connected with ancient
period
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periods
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but
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it is considered to be less valuable
due to
high
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level of change in education. In my opinion, it is really considered to be useful to study
history
as it can enhance our knowledge regarding the different historical events and monuments with relation to the good
maintainace
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maintenance
of them for the future generation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • historical knowledge
  • analyzing historical events
  • critical thinking
  • evidence-based reasoning
  • contemporary issues
  • practical benefit
  • advancements
  • interpretations
  • biased
  • misunderstandings
  • pragmatic value
  • rapidly changing world
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