Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples

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distinguish

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views about keeping among the people.

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of people believe that having a pet benefits them.

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However

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some people

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think

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that it may

harmful

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be harmful

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for their

children

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opinion

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opinion,

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the pros

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outweigh

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outweigh

the cons of having

pets

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animals

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hair and fur

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of

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allergic

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children

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are vulnerable .

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disease strikes victims swiftly. In

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additionally

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animals

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always like in the

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of nature .

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there are many

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in their hair . After

children

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play

their

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cat or dog. I guess they do not wash their arms and

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something or

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their face or eyes with grubby arms .

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cause

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of

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any

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up

pets

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every time and teach

children

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to always wash their hands If I tell

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next

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view about having a pet . There are a great deal of advantages

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children

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ʼs behaviour and

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pets

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environment .

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dogs are firmly and strong protection for

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are growing up

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some

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from

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their

animals

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,the merits of

pets

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are more impacted . For the reasons

duscussed

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discussed

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pets

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in the family . Since there are numerous

advanteges

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advantages

rather than disadvantages for their

children

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