The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the buiding industry. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram describes the way in which
bricks
are made for the building industry.
Overall
, there are five main steps in the process
of producing bricks
, starting from digging up the ground and ending with packaging procedures.
According to
the first stage, it can be observed that the clay
is
used Unnecessary verb
apply
for
to make the Change preposition
apply
bricks
is dug up from the ground by a large digger. This
clay
is then
placed onto a metal grid which is used to break up the clay
into small pieces. In this
process
, a roller is also
added to assist.
Following
this
, sand and water are added to the clay
, and then
a received mixture is turned into bricks
by either placing it into a mould or using a wire cutter. Afterwards, the process
continues with bricks
drying procedures Fix the agreement mistake
brick
during
1-2 days.
In the subsequent stage, the Change preposition
for
bricks
go through a heating and cooling process
. They are heated in a kiln at a moderate and then
a high temperature, within 870-1300 C, followed by a cooling process
in a chamber for 48-72 hours, which is equal to 2-3 days.
Finally
, after whole above written moments, it can be demonstrated that the bricks
are ready for packaging and consequently
for delivering to customers.Submitted by akhmedova.mb on
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