The line graph below shows the number of single-family homes constacted in the US by region over the period of six years. Summarize the information be selecting and reporting in the main features, and make comparison where relevant
The
number
of single family
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single-family
homes
was decreasing between 2006 and 2012. The highest number
of single-family homes
was in 2006 in all regions. The lowes
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lowest
number
of single-family homes
was in 2010 in all regions.
Most regions had the number
of homes
decreased significantly in 2006 and hit the lowest point in 2010, then
surged slightly of demand constant until 2012.Submitted by viktoria.popova92 on
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