You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organizer of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organizer of the meeting and include: -Details about the meeting -The problem you face -What should be done
Dear Sir/Madam,
I hope
this
letter finds you well and I am writing this
letter to explain Correct article usage
the disstaisfaction
disstaisfaction
Correct your spelling
dissatisfaction
about
the Change preposition
with
hotel
room that booked
for me and Add a missing verb
was booked
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the named
named
of the Replace the word
name
hotel
is Tej which is famous but my experience really
bad in Add a missing verb
is really
this
hotel
.
To start with, Taj
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the Taj
hotel
is located in Capitalize word
Hotel
centre
of Add an article
the centre
city
and I have to face too much noise Add an article
the city
of
Change preposition
from
horns
. Correct article usage
the horns
Also
, last
night, I was preparing my presentation for meeting
but Add an article
the meeting
a meeting
due to
loud voices that
it was really hard for me. Correct word choice
apply
Along
with
, the services of Correct pronoun usage
with this
this
hotel
is
not convenient because they give food one hour later after ordering.
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
However
, I think that we should change the location for Correct article usage
the metting
metting
. Since the Correct your spelling
meeting
metting
time is tomorrow evening at Correct your spelling
meeting
this
hotel
. Due to
loud voices, we could not concentrate on work. I hope you will understand my situation and I will be waiting for a good response from you.
Thank you,
Yours sincerely,
Harjeet.Submitted by harmanpreetkang20 on
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General
Review your letter for minor spelling and grammatical errors to improve overall clarity and professionalism.
Coherence Cohesion
Consider using paragraph breaks more effectively to separate your ideas clearly. This will help in presenting your points more coherently.
Task Achievement
To enhance task achievement, ensure all parts of the prompt are fully addressed with specific details and clear suggestions for resolution.
Task Achievement
Your letter successfully conveys dissatisfaction with the hotel accommodation and presents a clear request.
Positive Point
You did well in expressing the need for a change due to the unsuitable conditions at the hotel.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite