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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest populations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below gives information about the three countries with the highest populations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The provided table outlines the data
of
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 the
population
 density of three major countries (India,
China
 and the
USA
).
Overall
,
China
 and
USA
 have similar land
area
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areas
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 but the difference in their
population
 is quite wide. Out of all the three countries,
USA
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the USA
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 has the highest number of people living in urban areas
whereas
, India has its majority
population
 staying in rural areas. India has the maximum number of people staying in one square kilometre i.e. 455.
However
,
USA
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the USA
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 has
lowest
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the lowest
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population
 with only 36 people staying in one square Km. In terms
od
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of
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 the
population
 increase of each nation’s
population
 since 2017, India’s
population
 had a positive increase of 1.11% followed by the
USA
 and
China
, +0.71% and +0.39% respectively.
In addition
 to that, it is observable
China
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that China
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 and the
USA
 have almost
same
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the same
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area
 of land in square Kilometres 9 Million sq Kms approx., with varied distribution of
population
 in urban and rural
area
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areas
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, the
USA
 have 83% of
it’s
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population
 residing in urban
area
 where only 58% of chines
population
 stays in urban
area
.
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