The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The figures describe the Norbiton industrial area now and future development on

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site.

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it can be seen that the industries will be totally transformed in the upcoming days.

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, a roundabout is situated in the centre.

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, two roads are connected with it and a river on the north side.

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, factories are situated surrounding of ring road cycle and the east sides of the street. Turning to the remaining maps it can be illustrated that four paths are connected in the middle and shops are constructed in the south-west corner.

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, a medical centre is established in the southeast portion. All factories are converted into houses. A new bridge is constructed into the river, which improves transport facilities throughout walkways.

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, a playground is observed on the northeast portion and a school on the east.

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, farmland remains on the same side and a little roundabout is added on the south, which makes a connection between the path and the central part.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
planned future development
factories
warehouses
railway line
shopping center
residential buildings
college
mixed-use zone
commercial
residential
educational
green spaces
pedestrian walkways
housing
community
retail services
revitalize
quality of life
vibrant
sustainable

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