The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton,and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton,and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The picture shows data on an industrial area in the town of Norbiton and the development of the site for the future.
Overall
, what stands out on
this
map
is a new bridge above the
river
, and a school will be built on the right of the
map
. And many factories will be destroyed and will be replaced with housing.
Furthermore
, near the
square
is going to be built a shop in the southwest and a medical
center
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, a new road will be built, and three
neighborhoods
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neighbourhoods
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will be able to transport to the city, on the north a new area for residents is going to be built near the farmland.
Also
, farmland will be replaced in the corner
river
, and in the end, a new playground new built in the city and will be south of the
river
. In
this
map
, the
river
is north of the city, a
square
is almost at the
center
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of the
map
, and a small
square
is under the big
square
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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