: Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However,other people think that zoos are useful to protect the rare animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is often considered by some menageries are inhuman and should be banned by governments

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there are people who disagree with

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and think

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are helpful to protect endangered

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some support their opinion with reasonable arguments like numerous animals suffer in cramped cages and are not looked after correctly , others consider the animal collection a safe place for breeding and important to increase public knowledge and affection for

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and I rely on their arguments.

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essay will discuss two side views. The public who protest captivating and exhibiting fauna at the cages count on some undeniable reasons.

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, Captivity causes distress to beasts and shortens their life expectancy than wildlife. Because the numerous pathogens and effects lead to some ailment that does not appear in nature .

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a viewpoint,

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workers do not take care of animals sincerely especially

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animal conservatories in undeveloped countries. There, many servants even are not specialists in

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field.

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, the latest statistics show that 15 per cent of the sudden deaths of creatures in cages are

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the irresponsibility and ignorance of vets at the

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. The public who advocate protecting wildlife in captivity despite having objective views

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that bringing up new offspring of endangered

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and sparking interest children to the flora and fauna are the main reasons for saving

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in urban places. During the

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surveys, general residents of cities agreed with

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opinion.

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,

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are free factors that rare kinds encounter in wildlife. It contributes and

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faster revitalizing

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increasing the number of cheetahs in the Namibian conservation zone rapidly from 2 to 13 individuals.

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some support banning menageries and consider them injurious to creatures, there are people

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pay attention helpful side of

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like the importance of them in breeding

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and kindling general public interest in nature. By considering the argument I guess the latter view is more reliable and I support it.