Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many individuals suggest that

parents

should educate their kids on how to be good

community

members

,

while

others think that school plays a more important role in

this

process.

This

essay supports the idea of a balanced approach regarding the given issue, as an individual gets his manners and morals in the family, but

further

personality gets formed in

society

.

To begin

, the institution of the family plays a crucial role in our

community

because infants are born without any skills,

therefore

they get formed with the help of family

members

. Babies are not able to understand what is good and what is bad, so all of their life ideas and morals are taught by

parents

.

As a result

, basic skills and

behaviour

are formed

while

growing,

additionally

, in the period from 0-6 ages,

individual's

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behaviour

mostly depends on

parents

' attitude.

People

are not likely to change dramatically during their lives,

for

this

reason, their inner "I" which was formed in childhood still stays. Recent researches by the University of Cambridge show that 143 out of 200

parents

claim that their adult sons and daughters still hold childhood

characters

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. At the same time,

people

mostly spend their lives in a

community

around different

people

with various personalities. Getting older and more experienced,

people

change their

behaviour

. Obviously,

this

is because all of us develop very much during our lifetime and understand that our previous actions, ideas or characters were cringe or meaningless. Critics which come from

society

help not only adults

,

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but

also

children and adolescents to work on their manners. The survey which was held online via Instagram by one of the local psychology groups of Birmingham proved that 86.2% of

people

are open to public opinion and try to become better verses of themselves based on adequate criticism since it helps them to become valued

members

of humanity. In my opinion, both family and

society

have a great effect on our manners, morals, ideas and

behaviour

. It would be incorrect to choose only one position, as they both play a role in the process of personality creation. In conclusion,

although

there is an argument about what is the best place which can help children to become good

members

of

community

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, I strongly agree that both family and

society

should help children equally in that way,

due to

the better results.