The diagram below show how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates how geothermal energy is used to produce
electricity
. There are a fo main steps to generate Use synonyms
electricity
by geothermal energy named geothermal power plants.
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Overall
, there are 5 main processes to produce Linking Words
electricity
, namely cold Use synonyms
water
pumped down, the injection well, the production well, condenser and ready to generate.
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Firstly
, the cold Linking Words
water
is pumped down about 45 km to reach the geothermal zone. When it reaches Use synonyms
this
zone, it is melted by the hot rocks, which are called "the injection well'. Linking Words
Secondly
, the hot Linking Words
water
is pumped up until it reaches the condenser. It is steamed by the condenser to the Use synonyms
last
stage, which is generated. Linking Words
Finally
, the turbine is spun, which contains the hot Linking Words
water
and is powered by steam. After that, the Use synonyms
last
main stage is generated in Linking Words
this
whole process. It generates the Linking Words
electricity
Use synonyms
that is
powered by a turbine in the generator.Linking Words
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