The graph below shows the percentage of New Zealand primary school students learning a second language learned for the years 2006 to 2014.

The graph below shows the percentage of New Zealand primary school students learning a second language learned for the years 2006 to 2014.
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The line graph provides information about the percentage of New Zealand primary school students who had been learning a foreign
language
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by
language
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learned, between 2006 and 2014.
Overall
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, all the
languages
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learned had a downward trend and fluctuated significantly throughout the period.
However
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, Chinese showed an increase in
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learning from others and grew up overtaking German and other
languages
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.
According to
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the graph, the most popular
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language
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languages
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of study were French, Japanese and Spanish. French, as a common
language
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from beginning to end, started with around 30 %, and fluctuated until 2014, reaching a peak of 30 % in 2008.
In addition
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, 20
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per cent
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of students had studied
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Spanish
, a figure that gradually increased until 2011. Japanese by the middle of 2009. It
continned
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continued
rising to 2014, when there was a slight drop, ending up in 2014 with 22,5 %. The Japanese, for his part, decreased
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by half
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of it is percentage compared with the beginning.
On the other hand
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, Chinese, German, and other
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had less popularity among the students.
Although
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Chinese was not
as well-know
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a well-known
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language
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, it
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climbed significantly.
In contrast
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, German and other
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declined slowly with some fluctuations. It is
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important to highlight the dramatic rise and fall between 2012 and 2014 of other foreign
languages
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