The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.
The given pie charts display the electricity generation from different fuel sources in separate years, 1980 and 2000.
Overall
, in the
both countries, total production increased significantly. Remove the article
apply
Moreover
, in Australia, coal had the highest portion among other fuel sources in both years, while
in the
France the main source of electricity was allocated to natural Correct article usage
apply
power
in 2000.
According to
the first chart, half of the total generation consisted of coal, and this
amount went up dramatically to 130 units
in the end. Despite the fact that Hydro
Correct your spelling
Hydropower
power
saw a rising trend by
16 from 36 to 20 Change preposition
of
units
, natural gas and oil declined, to 2 unite
each.
Replace the word
units
In the
second graph shows, in 1980, coal and natural Change preposition
The
power
shared a similar proportion together totaling
50 Change the spelling
totalling
units
, and the former remained stable and the latter decreased substantially (2 units
) at the end
of the period. Correct your spelling
Additionally
Additionslly
, in the beginning, the share of oil, nuclear Correct your spelling
Additionally
power
and Hydro
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Hydropower
power
were
20, 15 and 5 Change the verb form
was
units
, respectively. production from hyro
Correct your spelling
hydro
power
dropped merely 2 units
, although
the electricity generation from nuclear power
and oil, with a dramatic increase to 126 and 25 units
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