The pie charts below show units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France in 1980 and 2000.
The given pie charts display the electricity generation from different fuel sources in separate years, 1980 and 2000.
Overall
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the
both countries, total production increased significantly. Remove the article
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Moreover
, in Australia, coal had the highest portion among other fuel sources in both years, Linking Words
while
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the
France the main source of electricity was allocated to natural Correct article usage
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power
in 2000.
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According to
the first chart, half of the total generation consisted of coal, and Linking Words
this
amount went up dramatically to 130 Linking Words
units
in the end. Despite the fact that Use synonyms
Hydro
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Hydropower
power
saw a rising trend Use synonyms
by
16 from 36 to 20 Change preposition
of
units
, natural gas and oil declined, to 2 Use synonyms
unite
each.
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units
In the
second graph shows, in 1980, coal and natural Change preposition
The
power
shared a similar proportion together Use synonyms
totaling
50 Change the spelling
totalling
units
, and the former remained stable and the latter decreased substantially (2 Use synonyms
units
) Use synonyms
at the end
of the period. Linking Words
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Additionally
Additionslly
, in the beginning, the share of oil, nuclear Correct your spelling
Additionally
power
and Use synonyms
Hydro
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Hydropower
power
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were
20, 15 and 5 Change the verb form
was
units
, respectively. production from Use synonyms
hyro
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hydro
power
dropped merely 2 Use synonyms
units
, Use synonyms
although
the electricity generation from nuclear Linking Words
power
and oil, with a dramatic increase to 126 and 25 Use synonyms
units
.Use synonyms
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