The graphs below show unemployment rates and average earnings according to level of education.
The bar charts compare the unemployment rate and the average weekly income of different levels of education.
It is clear that
the figure for people
who had high school diplomas had a high unemployment rate. In addition
, the salary of people
who had graduate
degrees was higher than other certificate holders
.
Around 5.5% of people
with high school diplomas were unemployed, whereas
only 1.2% who had a graduate
degree
could not find jobs. About 4.2% of the population who studied in some college were unoccupied, while
only approximately 2.5% of college degree
holders
were out of work.
Graduate
degree
holders
had the highest salary, at about $1,500 per week. People
who finished their studies with a college degree
had nearly $1,100 income per week while
person only studied in some colleges were around $425 per week lowerCorrect pronoun usage
apply
this
. It is noticeable that only had a high school diploma had the lowest income and was $900 less than the graduate
degree
holders
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