The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What is the reason for the growth in overweight people in society? How can this problem be solved?

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The problem of obesity among
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is alarming and
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our imminent attention. The modern
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is the culprit of the increasing number of overweight
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and both the
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and schools can take active
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alleviate the problem. There are several causes why the trend of overweight is becoming more prevalent. Modern
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, especially those living in urban areas in metropolitan cities, always emphasize efficiency so they prefer fast
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, microwave
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and cup noodles, which often contain a large amount of fat, salt, sugar and artificial
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additives. As
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are attracted to convenient and cheap but unhealthy
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, the rate of obesity has increased dramatically in recent decades and the number of
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who die from diet-related diseases like colon cancer has
also
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been increasing. Exercising on a regular basis is fundamental in improving
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it not only helps burn excessive calories, but it
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improves our cardiovascular system and
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muscles and bones.
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,
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living in the modern world lead a
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, where many
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sit for at least 8 hours at the office desk every day. After work, they seldom have the energy and motivation to
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so they prefer surfing on the Internet, playing video games and watching
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as ways of leisure. It is vitally important that action
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to combat these problems. The government should encourage the public to
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the habit of regular
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and should promote a healthy balanced diet, where they may launch campaigns to promote a
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, increase television advertisements to encourage the
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to at least
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for half an hour every day, or even collaborate with local televisions channels to make programs about
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and nutrition. When
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public is more well informed of the importance of
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and diet, they will be more aware of their living style and may attempt to change habits which are detrimental to
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. Another solution is that schools should not only attach to students'
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. The frequency or the duration of physical education lessons can be extended and the school may provide students with more extracurricular activities related to sports, like swimming, dancing and aerobic
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classes.
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more and more
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are suffering from problems related to
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, there are steps that can be taken by the government and
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to alleviate the problems and it is hoped that
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can lead a healthier
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • obesity
  • sedentary
  • caloric intake
  • genetics
  • nutritional awareness
  • processed foods
  • fast food
  • lifestyle diseases
  • preventative measures
  • tax incentives
  • urban planning
  • community gardens
  • wellness initiatives
  • dietary guidelines
  • physical fitness
  • calorie-dense
  • portion control
  • metabolic rate
  • health literacy
  • food deserts
  • work-life balance
  • junk food
  • BMI (Body Mass Index)
  • non-communicable diseases
  • food labeling
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