nowdays, more and more people don't wear their national clothes, and the clothes look almost the same all over the world. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

There is an increasing

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that

people

are more inclined to wear uniformly worldwide.

While

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involves several positive

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, I still consider that its negative influence outweighs its benefits. The

trend

of similar dressing

style

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can be attributed to

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exposure to foreign

culture

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and

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intensified global communication. Domestic consumers are becoming more

acquinted

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acquainted

with global

fashion

from efficient information

channel

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due to

the expansion of international trade.

Moreover

,

this

phenomenon

also

manifests the

overwelming

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of

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life

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style

.

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number of

people

wearing sports suits like

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or

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the transition of

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mindset to

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lifestyle

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compared

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ago.

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, there are more severe negative aspects

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this

trend

.

Firstly

,

people

might be highly influenced by seasonal

fashion

wordwide

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worldwide

rather than promoting

domestical

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domestic

classical or traditional

fashion

.

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, Chinese traditional clothes offer

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window to the past to help new generations deeply understand the traditions, customs and

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of

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style

in

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feudal

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dynasty. The erosion of foreign

fashion

style

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could be detrimental to

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of cultural heritage.

Seondly

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Secondly

, the appreciation of aesthetic value should not be

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by one particular type. Clothes

style

, as an important

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showcasing personalities, should be diversified,

thus

enriching the world community. In conclusion,

while

uniformed

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dressing taste alludes to positive current

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and

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, I highly agree that its negative influences outweigh its advantages.