The bar chart shows the percentage of school children learning to play different musical instrument in 2005, 2010 and 2015. (the piano was over 10% in 2005, over 20% in 2010, about 35% in 2015; the guitar was over 10% in 2005, about 18% in 2010, 40% in 2015; the drums was about 5% in 1005, about 4% in 2010, about 10% in 2015; the violin was 10% in 2005, 9% in 2010, 5% in 2015)

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of school children who

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to play four different musical instruments in three different years, 2005, 2010, and 2015.

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, piano and guitar experienced considerable increases

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violin fell during the given years. Based on the chart given, the percentage of students who learned to play the piano increased from around 12% in 2005 to 22% in 2010 before rising significantly

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around 35% in 2015.

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rising trend happened in guitar with over 10% in 2005 and increased to about 18% in 2010 before jumping to 40% in 2015. Another important trend is that Violin

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slightly decreased from 10% in 2005 to 9% in 2010 and

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5% in 2015. Drums,

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experienced

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from 5% in 2005 to 4% in 2010 before rising considerably to 10% in 2015.