The bar chart shows the percentage of school children learning to play different musical instrument in 2005, 2010 and 2015. (the piano was over 10% in 2005, over 20% in 2010, about 35% in 2015; the guitar was over 10% in 2005, about 18% in 2010, 40% in 2015; the drums was about 5% in 1005, about 4% in 2010, about 10% in 2015; the violin was 10% in 2005, 9% in 2010, 5% in 2015)
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of school children who
learn
to play four different musical instruments in three different years, 2005, 2010, and 2015. Wrong verb form
learned
Overall
, piano and guitar experienced considerable increases while
violin fell during the given years.
Based on the chart given, the percentage of students who learned to play the piano increased from around 12% in 2005 to 22% in 2010 before rising significantly at
around 35% in 2015. Change preposition
to
This
rising trend happened in guitar with over 10% in 2005 and increased to about 18% in 2010 before jumping to 40% in 2015.
Another important trend is that Violin which
slightly decreased from 10% in 2005 to 9% in 2010 and Correct pronoun usage
apply
then
5% in 2015. Drums, on the other hand
, initially
experienced Correct article usage
a fell
fell
from 5% in 2005 to 4% in 2010 before rising considerably to 10% in 2015.Replace the word
fall
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