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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table illustrates how much
milk
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 was consumed annually between 1990 and 2010 in four countries,
Netherlands
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, Australia,
Tanzania
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 and
Guatemala
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.
Overall
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, not only the steep growths in
Tanzania
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 and
Guatemala
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 are noticeable but
also
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 a downward tendency in the
Netherlands
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. To look into the details, spent
milk
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 in the
Netherlands
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 and Australia was massive from 1990 to 2010 but there were different tendencies between them. People in the
Netherlands
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 spent the largest amount of
milk
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 for 20 years and the consumption remained at a similar level for 20 years. The numbers
of
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in
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 Australia,
on the other hand
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, had a tendency to decrease. Especially in 2010, it showed a rapid decline of 2,000,000
liters
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litres
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.
Whereas
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, both
Tanzania
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 and
Guatemala
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 represented steep increases. There was a steep rise between 1990 and 2000 in
Tanzania
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, which demonstrated the most growth in all four countries. From 2000 to 2010, the numbers showed a mere increase. People in
Guatemala
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 spent
milk
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 more and more constantly. The figure for
Guatemala
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 in 2000 doubled compared to the figure in 1990 and in 2010 it increased by 29,000 liters.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, netherlands, tanzania, guatemala with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "steep" was used 3 times.
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