The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the prices of three different metals and how they changed monthly during 2014.
Overall
, it seems that all these metals (Linking Words
Copper
,Use synonyms
Nickel
,Use synonyms
Zinc
) decreased dramatically from Use synonyms
January
to June,Use synonyms
however
,from July to December they fluctuated between the 3 materials.
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To begin
with, Linking Words
Nickel
dropped from 6 % to 1 %from Use synonyms
January
to February,Use synonyms
further
decreasing dramatically from 1% to -3 % respectively. Linking Words
Zinc
for all Use synonyms
this
period declined from Linking Words
January
to April and stood at July with approximately 0,5 %. In terms of Use synonyms
Copper
from Use synonyms
January
to February grew from 1 to 3 per cent,Use synonyms
however
, Linking Words
further
declined from 3% to 1% and gained -1$ in July.
Linking Words
Furthermore
,from July to September all these three metals grew and stood Linking Words
Nickel
at -1%, Use synonyms
Zinc
at approximately 0,5%,and Use synonyms
Copper
at 1 %, respectively. From September to December Use synonyms
Nickel
fluctuated from -2% to 1%,Use synonyms
Zinc
from about 0,5% to 2%,and Use synonyms
Copper
from 1% to 1,5%.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words copper, nickel, zinc, january with synonyms.
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