The table gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles.
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The figure presents data on the underground
railway
systems
in six metropolitan cities
including London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto, and Los Angeles.
Overall
, it is clearly stated that the earliest built underground railway
systems
was in London with the longest route among the other Fix the agreement mistake
system
country
. Meanwhile, the latest Fix the agreement mistake
countries
constructed
was in Los Angeles which has the shortest trail.
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construction
To begin
, London established its underground railway
systems
in 1863 with a 394-kilometre route, making this
country become
the first pioneer of Verb problem
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this
public facility. This
infrastructure is able to carry 775 passengers annually. Also
, both Paris and Tokyo built the
similar services in 1900 and 1927 respectively and these Correct article usage
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cities
build
the farthest distances totaling 199 and 155 kilometres each. Wrong verb form
built
Therefore
, these common infrastructures attract most
commuters every year totaling 1191 and 1927 each.
Moving on to other Correct article usage
the most
cities
, Los Angeles successfully constructed its underpass railway
systems
in 2001 with only a twenty-eight-kilometre length. As a result
, this
system has affected to
little interest calculating just 50 travellers per annum. Change preposition
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In addition
, Kyoto and Washington DC built the same infrastructure in 1981 and 1976 each in which their routes are respectively 11 and 126 kilometers. Subsequently
, these cities
are yearly able to escort 45 and 144 passengers.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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