You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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a key information
about the Remove the article
key information
a piece of key information
percentage
of Correct article usage
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the
citizens in four cities Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand and Indonesia from 1970 to 2040. The data are Correct article usage
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mesuard
in Correct your spelling
measured
percentage
of total people.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that Malaysia will have the highest percentage
by 2040. In addition
, Philippines
begin with the highest number of people living in Correct article usage
the Philippines
city
, Add an article
the city
a city
whereas
by 2040, will have the second lowest per cent
after Thailand.
In terms of Correct your spelling
percentage
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the philippines
philippines
, it starts with a Change the capitalization
Philippines
litile
above 30 Correct your spelling
little
percent
and it Change the spelling
per cent
show
a Change the verb form
shows
nosie
increasing Correct your spelling
noise
nose
untill
it will Correct your spelling
until
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be reached
reached
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reaches
approximtely
50 by 2040. Correct your spelling
approximately
Moreover
, Malaysia begin
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began
also
30 per cent, and faced a significant increasing
from 1970 to 2040. It reached almost 80 Replace the word
increase
percent
.
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per cent
According to
what is shown, Thailand starts almost one
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,
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increasing
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reach
one half
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one-half
percentage
. Lastly
, Indonesia begin
with the lowest number almost 15, Wrong verb form
began
however
it showed a significant Add a comma
however,
raiseing
until it reached 60 per cent.Correct your spelling
rise
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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