The given table illustrates the proportions of attendance in secondary schools in India. These values are given from 2000 to 2015 with a gap of 5 years.

The given table illustrates the proportions of attendance in secondary schools in India. These values are given from 2000 to 2015 with a gap of 5 years.
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The table compares the percentage of students that attended different types of
schools
in India every 5 years, from 2000 to 2015.
Overall
,
attendance
was the highest among convent-run
schools
and the lowest among village government
schools
.
Furthermore
, all
schools
saw a rise in the proportion of attendees over the entire period. In 2000, government-run city
schools
had an
attendance
rate of 62%, compared to village government
schools
, where only 24% of students attended classes.
Nevertheless
, each school witnessed a drastic rise in the proportion of attendees in the following years and by 2015, 78% of students were attending the government city
schools
and 44% attended the
schools
in villages.
On the other hand
,
attendance
rates fluctuated slightly in General English medium
schools
, dropping from 52% in 2000 to 49% in 2005, after which it showed a rise ending at 59% in 2015.
In Contrast
, the Covent-run
schools
which were the most attended, started the period with an 80.5%
attendance
rate and ended it with 89% in 2015.
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