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Task1 Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving license is advantageous. • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips

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Dear James, I hope you're doing well. I'm writing
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 letter to give you some advice with
regards
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regard
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 to learning
driving
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to drive
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 and the benefits of getting the license. There are many positives are there from getting a license.
Firstly
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, you can drive anywhere to find jobs with your own car
instead
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 of taking
taxi
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a taxi
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 as I know very well that each
trips
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trip
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are
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is
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 very expensive. Eventually,
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 will help you save the money and spend on buying books. I heard that in Greens Road, the Willam Driving School is performing very well as some of my friends have recently
took
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taken
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 their driving test over there, and they are fully satisfied.
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,
authorities
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the authorities
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 who are working there are very friendly, and
teaching
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the teaching
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 school has
good
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a good
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 relationship with them. One of the most important guidance I'd like to share
you
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with you
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 here is that you should never drive alone using
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a learners
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learners
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learner
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 pass, which is illegal. I saw many learners
do
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make
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this
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 mistake and after they got caught by
police
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the police
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 they regret
for
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apply
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their mistakes.
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 is considered to be one of the biggest crimes in our legal system and police will give a huge
penality
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penalty
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. All the best, John

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Coherence & Cohesion
Consider organizing your ideas into clearer, more distinct paragraphs to improve readability.
Task Achievement
Make sure to expand on each key point, providing detailed examples where possible, to fully explore the task's topics.
Language
Double-check for minor grammatical errors and aim to vary your sentence structure to enhance the complexity and flow of your writing.
Tone
Engaging and friendly tone throughout the letter, making it feel personal and sincere.
Task Response
Addresses all parts of the task effectively with relevant information and recommendations.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • driving license
  • independence
  • commute
  • flexibility
  • reputable
  • certified instructors
  • high pass rate
  • road safety
  • regulations
  • driving conditions
  • driver's handbook
  • patience
  • practical skills
  • maneuverability
  • roadworthy
  • navigational skills
  • defensive driving
  • responsible attitude
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