The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years.
"The given two pie charts provide data on the comparison of five different types of
energy
generated in France from 1995 to 2005.
Overall
, it is clear that
the two charts show a similar trend in both years. It is also
worth noting that gas comprises the largest portion throughout the given period.
Looking at the charts in more detail, in 1995, coal was the largest energy
source at 29.80%, followed by gas, petrol, nuclear, and other energy
production. Additionally
, the percentage for coal increased slightly by around 1% from 29.80% in 1995 to 30.93% in 2005, making it the predominant source of energy
production in 2005. Gas accounted for the second-largest portion in both years, with figures of 29.63% in 1995 and 30.31% in 2005.
In contrast
, despite petrol accounting for 29.27% in 1995, its figure decreased by around 10% to 19.55% in 2005. Additionally
, nuclear energy
constituted 6.40% of the energy
generated in 1995 and showed a rising trend to 10.10% in 2005. The other energy
production sector also
experienced a gradual increase of around 5%, rising from 4.90% to 9.10%."Submitted by kimjy3329 on
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