Some people believe that children should spend all their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. agree = maintain, own traditions disagree = cultures, problem sosializing

Many parents want their

children

to spend all their leisure

time

with them,

while

some

people

say

that is

wrong and will lead to many demerits. In

this

report, I will go through both sides and

then

allow

my

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to share my point of view. Consuming

time

with relatives is joyful, helpful, and protective;

as a consequence

, some families demand the

youngers

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to spend

time

with them only. Spending

time

with family helps

maintaining

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the child's beliefs and traditions. For

furher

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further

explanation, a study captured that on the one hand, when

children

spend

time

with their ancestors, they learn a lot about their own culture;

on the other hand

,

socilazing

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socializing

with strangers leads to losing the ties between the child and his background culture.

Additionally

,

this

helps

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youngers

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youngsters

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from bad

people

.

For example

, a lot of mothers acknowledged that their

childrens'

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friends dramatically affect their decisions, style, and opinions, so they prevent them

spending

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from spending

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their free

time

with any stranger, even if they want to.

Although

the points mentioned above are strong, there are adverse points that hold equal strength.

Firstly

, it is important to learn about different cultures. To explain that, many reports

illustrated

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that learning a variety of customs is helpful and joyful;

however

, to learn others' customs accurately,

people

should spend their free

time

with strangers.

Secondly

, spending leisure

time

with

limited

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a limited

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number of

people

will

leads

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to psychological issues in the future. Some articles said that if

children

do not use to make relationships during their childhood, they will not be able to do that during their adulthood.

Besides

that, a lot of adults said that it is extremely hard for them to communicate with others because they did not spend

time

with strangers when they were

children

. In conclusion,

Although

consuming

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spending

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time

with relatives is useful, cheerful, and safer, communicating with others is more beneficial, attractive, and interesting.

As a result

, I believe that

children

should make strong bonds

out of

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with

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their

family

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families

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.