The chart below shows the number of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided bar graph presents the
participation
of adults in various major sports in a specific area during the years 1997 and 2017.
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Overall
, the data illustrates fluctuations in the number of adults engaging in different sports over a 20-year period. Tennis and football experienced significant growth, Linking Words
while
cricket saw a considerable decline. Linking Words
Additionally
, rugby and basketball demonstrated varying trends, and the Linking Words
participation
in swimming and golf remained relatively stable.
Tennis stood out as the sport with the highest number of participants in both years, with a substantial increase from 10,000 to 20,000 Use synonyms
individuals
. Following closely, football experienced the most considerable growth, surging from over 45,000 to nearly 50,000 participants. Use synonyms
Moreover
, rugby witnessed a moderate rise from 20,000 to 25,000 Linking Words
individuals
. Notably, swimming maintained a stable Use synonyms
participation
level of around 35,000 Use synonyms
individuals
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Conversely
, cricket faced a significant decrease from approximately 25,000 to 30,000 participants. Linking Words
Additionally
, basketball saw an increase in Linking Words
participation
, reaching 25,000 Use synonyms
individuals
in 2017.
In summary, the data reflects varying trends in adult Use synonyms
participation
in major sports over the two decades. Tennis and football displayed substantial growth, Use synonyms
while
cricket experienced a notable decline. Linking Words
Furthermore
, rugby and basketball demonstrated moderate changes, and swimming and golf maintained relatively stable Linking Words
participation
levels.Use synonyms
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