The chart below gives information about the percentage of male and female teacher in six different kind of education setting in UK in 2010.

The chart below gives information about the percentage of male and female teacher in six different kind of education setting in UK in 2010.
The chart displays data about teachers in the United Kingdom based on their educational setup in the year 2010. Upon first glance,
it is clear that
the female
workforce
is larger than the male
workforce
, in general. There are very few male teachers in the primary and pre-school
levels
with female teachers dominating these
levels
with nearly 100%
population
.
Secondly
, at secondary school
levels
, male
staff
nearly close the gap to female
staff
. The female
staff
only lead by a small margin
while
at the college level, there is an equal ratio of male to female
staff
. At the college level, both male and female
staff
occupy about 50% of the
workforce
.
Thirdly
, there is a contrast in the
workforce
population
in private training institutes and university
levels
, where male faculty are seen in higher populations. Especially at the university level, the male faculty exceeds the female
population
by more than 20% with over 60% of the
population
being male.
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