The chart below gives information about the percentage of male and female teacher in six different kind of education setting in UK in 2010.
The chart displays data about teachers in the United Kingdom based on their educational setup in the year 2010. Upon first glance,
it is clear that
the female workforce
is larger than the male workforce
, in general. There are very few male teachers in the primary and pre-school levels
with female teachers dominating these levels
with nearly 100% population
.
Secondly
, at secondary school levels
, male staff
nearly close the gap to female staff
. The female staff
only lead by a small margin while
at the college level, there is an equal ratio of male to female staff
. At the college level, both male and female staff
occupy about 50% of the workforce
.
Thirdly
, there is a contrast in the workforce
population
in private training institutes and university levels
, where male faculty are seen in higher populations. Especially at the university level, the male faculty exceeds the female population
by more than 20% with over 60% of the population
being male.Submitted by insighttribez on
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