The line graph shows the changes in the number of overseas tourists in three different regions (coast, lakes, and mountains) in each country in Europe. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates how the overseas
tourists
in three different regions which are coast
, lakes, and mountains in every European country Correct article usage
the coast
evolve
from 1987 to 2007. Units are measured in thousands.
Wrong verb form
evolved
Overall
, the number
of foreign visitors
increased throughout the given period although
there are some places faced
a fluctuation. It can clearly be seen that the coast is Correct pronoun usage
that faced
area
which witnessed Add an article
an area
the area
a
largest overseas Correct article usage
the
tourists
numbers, compared with the other two Fix the agreement mistake
tourist
area
.
In terms of the place with the highest level of foreign Change to a plural noun
areas
tourists
, the coast's visitors
number
started at exactly 40. In the following years, the number
slightly decreased to about 35. Thereafter
, the visitors
had a dramatic growth and Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
reach
it is Wrong verb form
reached
highest
level at approximately 75 in 2007.
Regarding the other two areas, the overseas Change the article
the highest
tourists
of the mountains and the lakes stood at precisely 20 and 10, respectively. The growing visitors
Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
intersect
at around 25 in 1992. From Wrong verb form
intersected
this
point onwards, the lakes' visitors
increased to 40 and soared to roughly 75 in 2002. Then
, the number
hit a through at 50 in 2007. In contrast
, the mountains' tourists
number
remained stable at 30 between 1997 and 2002. Then
, the number
experienced a little growth by around 5 in the last
period of time.Submitted by mmmuuu on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists, number, visitors with synonyms.
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