The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph illustrates that people who are not working how to spend their time
last
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year in
UK
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the UK
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. It can be seen that
women
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and men
categorized
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are categorized
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by
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into
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two
type
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types
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which are morning and afternoon
also
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there are 14 options
what
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for what
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they choose to do.
Overall
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,
proportion
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the proportion
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of housework
at
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is at
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the top of the list
in
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for
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both
gender
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genders
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however
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rate
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of drinking had
lowest
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the lowest
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mark on the table.
Moreover
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, both
gender
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genders
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more likely to do shopping in the morning.
In addition
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, the
rate
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of housework in the morning
women
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category
significantly
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is significantly
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high with 49;
on the other hand
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,
percentage
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the percentage
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of playing
sport
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sports
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and staying in bed for
women
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in the afternoon has no
marked
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marks
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so
they
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they are
they were
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not interested in these activities.
While
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the
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apply
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most men prefer to do job hunting the
rate
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with 22 in the morning, they not
spent
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spend
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their time staying in bed in the afternoon so
with
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for
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this
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reason
rate
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of
this
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activity
has
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is
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just 1. In conclusion, it can be observed that there are many activities people
spent
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spend
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spare their time
when
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on when
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they
not
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do not
did not
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have a job
also
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there are some differences between the
rate
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of men and
women
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who choose what to do.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words women, rate with synonyms.
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