The best way to reduce crime among young people is to teach parents good parenting skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and examples agree = main reason, some wrong disagree = environment, old

Some people say that teaching

parents

how to raise their

children

correctly will reduce the percentage of crimes,

while

others say that there are other and more effective factors to

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murder. In

this

report, I will go through both sides and

then

allow me to share my point of view. Learning professional parenting

skills

is beneficial, effective, and necessary;

as a consequence

, many people

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suggested

suggest

that it is essential to learn how to act

acurately

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accurately

with

children

.

Firstly

, the criminal's background is the main reason for committing a crime. For

further

explanation, a study illustrated that the majority of killers,

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thieves

, and criminals acknowledged that some issues, problems, and situations that happened in the past

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them, so they become offenders.

Secondly

, parenting is a job, just like any other one, so it requires learning to become

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professional

. being a parent is a unique job that

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the whole community, so they should learn how to deal with their

children

so that they raise them correctly.

Although

the points mentioned above are strong, there are adverse points that hold equal strength. The first one is that the environment is the most effective factor, not the

parents

'

skills

.

For example

, A lot of studies illustrated that many offenders were

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influenced

by their friends; even though their

parents

were capable of directing them correctly, they followed their band

instead

of their family.

Besides

that, teaching ancestors is useless. To explain that, a report

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that despite the huge number of courses that are offered nowadays, more crimes are happening; which

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that these courses do not help to reduce the percentage of murders.

This

is because of having a variety of personalities,

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, and abilities, some adults acknowledged that when they tried to learn these

skills

, they recognized that they

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useless;

as a result

, even though some

parents

were learning how to direct their

children

,

this

did not

prevert

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prevent

them from being an offender. In conclusion,

although

effeciant

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efficient

parenting

skills

are needful, they are not enough to reduce crime among young people. So I do not believe that

this

will be the ideal solution.