Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some argue that universities should ensure equal representation of men and women in every major. In my opinion, I disagree with
this
idea, since Linking Words
students
can attend the curriculum that they like.
On one hand, having the same Use synonyms
number
of men and women in all degrees is simply unrealistic. Student numbers in the major should depend on the applications rather than be mandatory for equal Use synonyms
gender
. Mandating the university to fill courses with an equal Use synonyms
number
of males and females could potentially limit Use synonyms
students
' opportunities to pursue their desired major, as schools may restrict their freedom of choice to ensure Use synonyms
gender
parity. Use synonyms
For example
, in the nursing major, there are more female applicants, Linking Words
whereas
only a small Linking Words
number
of men express interest in nursing. Use synonyms
Thus
, if the university just focuses on the Linking Words
number
of genders, it will break the student's dream.
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On the other hand
, every major profession has its own Linking Words
gender
requirements. I Use synonyms
also
believe that people can attend every major that they prefer because the university should be a place to help Linking Words
students
achieve their goals. Every subject has its own appeal aspect; Use synonyms
for example
, Linking Words
airplane
machinery is more suitable for males because they have an inherent affinity for machines. Change the spelling
aeroplane
Therefore
, in reality, major professors are more welcome Linking Words
males
. Change preposition
than males
Consequently
, educational Linking Words
institution
Fix the agreement mistake
institutions
owing to
arrange the major proportion in Verb problem
apply
that
Correct pronoun usage
which
students
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interesting
Replace the word
interested
in
rather than Change preposition
apply
control
the Wrong verb form
controlling
gender
's proportions.
In conclusion, every student should have the right to choose the major that they like and find interesting. Use synonyms
This
way, nations can produce skilled and diligent professionals.Linking Words
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