The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
What has been depicted in the pie charts is the proportion of
water
used for three different
purposes
in six areas of the world.
Overall
,
water
used for agricultural
purposes
ranked first in four regions of the world,
while
that
of
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domestic
purposes
stood
last
in the amount allocated in six given areas.
Moreover
, industrial use had the highest share of
water
usage in
two
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areas. The largest proportion of
water
used
allocated
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to agricultural
purposes
(88 %) in Central Asia, followed closely by Africa and South East Asia, the former was 84%, and the latter was a little above 80 per
cent
.
Moreover
, 39 and 32 % of
water
usage was devoted to agricultural
purposes
in North
America
and Europe, respectively,
while
that
of
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in South
America
reached around 70 per
cent
. Domestic
purposes
in South
America
and Central Asia share
similar
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a similar
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proportion, which
were
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7
per
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cent
,
water
used in North
America
and Europe experienced
by
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2 % from 15 to 13 %.
Additionally
, a bit below
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and 9 per
cent
of
water
usage is used for domestic
purposes
in South
America
and Africa, in order.
Although
approximately half of
water
used for industrial use in North
America
and Europe, in other mentioned countries, the share of
water
used ranged from minority to 12 %
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.

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  • consumption
  • irrigation
  • domestic
  • industrial
  • regional disparity
  • economic structure
  • sustainable management
  • water-scarce
  • population density
  • urbanization
  • data trends
  • resource allocation
  • percentage distribution
  • extremes
  • variations
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