The bar chart compares the proportion of boys and girls who participated in various sports in the year 2002
The bar graph illustrates the number of boys and girls in England town there are
participating
in five Wrong verb form
participated
sports
tennis , badminton , cycling , swimming, football and hockey in 2002. As reflected y axis proportion of people from 0 to 70 with an interval of ten participants.
Overall
,the highest percentage of sports
that according to
male section it is football ; where, it is considered that hokey undermost among sports
.In contrast
, female sections have a high percentage of tennis,while
a hokey same a male section at least level.
In general, among men in this
survey around 60 people preferred playing football more than other sports
;nevertheless
, tennis and swimming had about 50 boys and approximately 42 , respectively.As for cycling have almost 36 participants the third favorite sport in the chart.On the other hand
play of the hokey shortened level in the table.
In fact , the percentage of level
choosing swimming in the female section reached 50 girls higher play.Fix the agreement mistake
levels
Also
, badminton has
second chosen Verb problem
was
according to
the graph proportion of 40.Nevertheless
, teenagers which
prefer are higher than the younger by 10%.Correct pronoun usage
who
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sports with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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