Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollutions problem. To what extend do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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raising the

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of

petrol

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can reduce the problem of traffic congestion and

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, I totally agree with

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statement

. By increasing the

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of driving,

public

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will have to seek

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alternative

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,

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as taking public

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.

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,

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merely adding the

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of driving is not enough, the government should optimize public

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,allowing

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easier access and increasing willingness to use it. In order to reduce traffic

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or

pollutions problem

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pollution problems

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, the government should increase the

petrol

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price and tax, that will

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reduce

people

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's desire to drive private

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because it is too costly.

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will

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consider taking public

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such

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as railway or bus.

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, in Hong Kong, the rate of

petrol

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is highly taxed,

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, the majority of

people

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use public

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for daily commute.

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can serve large amounts of

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at once and is

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more

environmental

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friendly.

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,

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merely adding

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cost

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the cost

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of

petrol

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is not enough, in order to encourage

people

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to take public

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, the

transport

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system and infrastructures need to be

prfounded

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founded

profound

pounded

.

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, in Japan, the train system

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very well established. It is very

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, efficient, reliable and

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-friendly,

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,

people

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are more likely to use public

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compared to driving. In conclusion, not only

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inflating the

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of driving can reduce congestion and pollutant emissions, but the government should

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invest more

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public

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infrastructure and develop a more reliable

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network, so that

people

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will prefer using public

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over driving private vehicles.