Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollutions problem. To what extend do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

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raising the

cost

of

petrol

can reduce the problem of traffic congestion and

pollutions

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pollution

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, I totally agree with

this

statment

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statement

. By increasing the

cost

of driving,

public

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the public

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will have to seek

for

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alternative

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alternatives

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,

such

as taking public

transport

.

However

,

by

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merely adding the

cost

of driving is not enough, the government should optimize public

transport

,allowing

people

easier access and increasing willingness to use it. In order to reduce traffic

jam

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or

pollutions problem

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, the government should increase the

petrol

price and tax, that will

then

reduce

people

's desire to drive private

vehicle

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because it is too costly.

People

will

then

consider taking public

transport

such

as railway or bus.

For example

, in Hong Kong, the rate of

petrol

is highly taxed,

therefore

, the majority of

people

use public

transport

for daily commute.

This

can serve large amounts of

people

at once and is

also

more

environmental

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friendly.

However

,

by

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merely adding

cost

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the cost

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of

petrol

is not enough, in order to encourage

people

to take public

transport

, the

transport

system and infrastructures need to be

prfounded

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founded

profound

pounded

.

For example

, in Japan, the train system

are

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very well established. It is very

assessable

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accessible

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, efficient, reliable and

cost

-friendly,

therefore

,

people

are more likely to use public

transport

compared to driving. In conclusion, not only

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inflating the

cost

of driving can reduce congestion and pollutant emissions, but the government should

also

invest more

on

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public

transport

infrastructure and develop a more reliable

transport

network, so that

people

will prefer using public

transport

over driving private vehicles.