The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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A quick glace The given diagram illustrates the generation of electricity which runs on geothermal energy.
Overall
, the provided progress has five distinct stages which consist of the flowing down of cold
water
, the injection well, the compensation of
steam
, the production well, and
finally
generation. The progress of generation commenced with cold
water
which flowed down to below the soil approximately 4.5 kilometres. After that, at the second stage, cold
water
reached the geothermal zone and there, was exposed to heat by hot rocks.
Subsequently
, after the hot
water
attained enough temperature pumped up to the condenser which converts the hot
water
into
steam
and produces adequate energy to make the generator run.
To conclude
, releasing
steam
by the condenser,
went
Wrong verb form
goes
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through the pipe and reaches the turbine and
then
, the turbine
run
Correct subject-verb agreement
runs
show examples
on
steam
and contributes power to the generator and contributed power to the generator.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, steam with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • renewable source
  • sustainable
  • drilling wells
  • hot water and steam
  • drive turbines
  • generate electricity
  • conversion
  • cooling process
  • re-injected
  • efficiency
  • environmental impact
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