The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A quick glace The given diagram illustrates the generation of electricity which runs on geothermal energy.
Overall
, the provided progress has five distinct stages which consist of the flowing down of cold Linking Words
water
, the injection well, the compensation of Use synonyms
steam
, the production well, and Use synonyms
finally
generation.
The progress of generation commenced with cold Linking Words
water
which flowed down to below the soil approximately 4.5 kilometres. After that, at the second stage, cold Use synonyms
water
reached the geothermal zone and there, was exposed to heat by hot rocks. Use synonyms
Subsequently
, after the hot Linking Words
water
attained enough temperature pumped up to the condenser which converts the hot Use synonyms
water
into Use synonyms
steam
and produces adequate energy to make the generator run.
Use synonyms
To conclude
, releasing Linking Words
steam
by the condenser, Use synonyms
went
through the pipe and reaches the turbine and Wrong verb form
goes
then
, the turbine Linking Words
run
on Correct subject-verb agreement
runs
steam
and contributes power to the generator and contributed power to the generator.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, steam with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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