You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows how the UK unemployed spent their time last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The table shows
last
year's proportion of males and females spending their Linking Words
time
in the UK who are unemployed.
It is noticeable that the unemployed people spent their Use synonyms
time
in 14 categories throughout their day. for male, most of them spent their Use synonyms
time
finding jobs during the morning . And for female, most of them spent their Use synonyms
time
doing house chores during the day Use synonyms
time
.
During the morning, 22% of unemployed Use synonyms
men
spent their Use synonyms
time
hunting for jobs Use synonyms
while
49% of unemployed Linking Words
women
were busy doing house chores. Use synonyms
This
trend was followed by 20% of Linking Words
men
and 26% of Use synonyms
women
who spent their Use synonyms
time
shopping during that Use synonyms
time
. In contrast, around 2% of Use synonyms
men
spent their Use synonyms
time
drinking and 3% of them doing nothing. Use synonyms
While
1% of Linking Words
women
spent their Use synonyms
time
either drinking or playing sports.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the unemployed Linking Words
men
enjoyed attending to garden or watching TV in the afternoon among all 14 categories with 13% and 14% respectively. Use synonyms
Women
tend to spend their Use synonyms
time
on the same trend in the morning Use synonyms
time
which is 21% on housework and 17% on shopping respectively.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words time, men, women with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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