The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The map below shows three proposed sites for a new supermarket (A, B and c) in the city of Ellington. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words
The map illustrates the proposal of three future supermarkets in the city of Ellington.
Overall
, there will be one new market in the residential area,
while
the rest will be built in the countryside. Two of those buildings will be next to the railway, and the
last
one will be near the motorway. Building A will be constructed right in the middle of the residential section and the industrial region.
This
is in the northwest part of the city. It will be only one call away from the traffic-free zone. The B shop will be the farthest place
,
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because it will be situated in the northernmost part of the countryside and can only be reached by motorway.
Although
the C retail place will be built in the uptown sector, it will be quite accessible for people who stay at the housing complex or at the factories. It will
also
be the nearest shop to the airport. In conclusion, the three buildings will be scattered all over the city and serve the 120.000 population.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proposed sites
  • supermarket
  • locations
  • central
  • outskirts
  • residential areas
  • transport hubs
  • proximity
  • major roads
  • landmarks
  • accessibility
  • competition
  • shopping district
  • industrial area
  • green spaces
  • logistic ease
  • isolated
  • densely populated
  • traffic
  • customer reach
  • expansion possibilities
  • accessibility
  • customer base
  • logistical convenience
  • recommend
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