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The pie chart shows the number of people who were using different languages online. The table shows the average number of people online each year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie chart shows the number of people who were using different languages online. The table shows the average number of people online each year. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates how many
people
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 using different online
languages
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 and the
table
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 demonstrates the typical number of population online yearly from November 1997 to August 2001. Units are measured in percentages (pie chart and
table
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) and in millions (
table
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).
Overall
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, it can clearly be seen that almost half of the society uses the same online language.
Furthermore
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, with the exception of English, there are nine other
languages
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 that
people
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 usually use when online. Meanwhile, from the
table
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, we can see that the total population online increased throughout the period of time. In terms of the online
languages
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 that
people
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 use, English is the online language most
people
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 use with 43.
Moreover
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, the next
languages
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 are Japanese and Chinese with similar numbers 8.9 and 8.8 respectively. The other
languages
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 vary from 2-6.
However
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, the smallest percentage of online
languages
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 is Dutch with 2.1. Regarding the average number of
people
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 online each year, the total population started at 76 million in 1997. In the following years, the number witnessed gradual growth until hit it
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 highest level at 513 in the
last
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 period of time.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, languages, table with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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