Two maps show an Island, and changes that take place after construction of tourist facilities.
Two diagrams illustrate the comparison of the
island
between before and after of
the Change preposition
apply
construction
of facilities.
Overall
, it is clear that
the construction
created a number of houses and facilities that could attract potential tourists. It built a lot of house
for accommodation, and Fix the agreement mistake
houses
also
transportation
system to reach the Correct article usage
a transportation
island
.
Before the construction
, there were forest
Fix the agreement mistake
forests
in
the western and eastern Change preposition
on
side
of the Fix the agreement mistake
sides
island
, and it seems that eastern
Correct article usage
the eastern
forest
are larger than Fix the agreement mistake
forests
western
. Correct article usage
the western
Also
, the island
was surrounded by sea and a beach was located in the westernmost part of the island
.
On the other hand
, after the construction
, the island
was totally changed. The most noticeable change was in infrastructure. In the southern part of the island
, a pier was build
and it plays Change the verb form
was built
a
important role Change the article
an
to
parking ships. Change preposition
in
Furthermore
, in the middle of the island
, reception
house was constructed and it connects with the pier and a restaurant via Correct article usage
a reception
vehicle
track.Correct article usage
a vehicle
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