Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter explain why you changed jobsdescribe your new jobtell him/her your other news
Dear Papuk,
I am writing
this
letter to finds
you well and I hope you stay Wrong verb form
find
health
and have fun.
So I changed my Replace the word
healthy
job
because I am not be
able Change the verb form
am not
with
the college there because my college there is toxic to me Change preposition
apply
that is
why i
Change the capitalization
I
resign
from my Wrong verb form
resigned
job
, it is I feel not comfortable
Rephrase
uncomfortable
to stay
long term at my company.
And now I am still Change the verb form
staying
loking
for Correct your spelling
looking
new
Add an article
a new
job
on the internet
to Capitalize word
Internet
finds
a great Wrong verb form
find
job
. Besides
, a growing number of my friend
it same they Fix the agreement mistake
friends
also
still looking for a
new Correct article usage
apply
job
Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
Rephrase
apply
also
. But from this
letter
I want to inform you about Add a comma
letter,
others
news Correct quantifier usage
other
such
as I got a good job
like become
Wrong verb form
becoming
Correct article usage
a waiters
waiters
in Gili Fix the agreement mistake
waiter
Treawangan
and my company its name is Gili Correct your spelling
Trawangan
Turtlle
and Correct your spelling
Turtle
this
place close
Add a missing verb
is close
with
my home Change preposition
to
therefore
i
agree and Change the capitalization
I
choose
Wrong verb form
chose
this
job
.
I fell
exhilarated when I got Correct your spelling
felt
this
job
. Others
way my parent proud of me Correct quantifier usage
Another
when
I got Add a missing verb
was when
beautiful
Add an article
a beautiful
job
close with
my countryside.
I hope you will Change preposition
to
proud
of me Add a missing verb
be proud
about
Change preposition
for
this
information, and please if you have free time or day
Correct article usage
a day
of
just come to my home to enjoy my little party with my family.
Best,
AjiburrachmanCorrect your spelling
off
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coherence cohesion
Focus on clearer paragraphing to enhance the logical structure of your letter. Each paragraph should represent a distinct idea or part of the message.
coherence cohesion
Pay attention to proper greetings and closings to maintain a suitable writing tone for letters to friends. It helps in making your letter feel more personal and warm.
coherence cohesion
Ensure your ideas are organized in a manner that each paragraph focuses on a single aspect you’re addressing, such as reasons for changing jobs, details about the new job, and your other news.
task achievement
Your letter effectively addresses all parts of the prompt, but refining the organization and clarity of your ideas will improve its completeness and make it easier to follow.
task achievement
Using a tone that's appropriate for a friend adds a personal touch to your letter. Consider incorporating phrases or expressions that you would naturally use in a conversation with a friend.
task achievement
You shared personal news and feelings, which is essential in a letter to a friend.
coherence cohesion
Your effort to use varied sentence structures and vocabulary is commendable.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,
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