The chart below shows average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities.
The table illustrates data about the average
time
, in Use synonyms
hours
and minutes, of Use synonyms
men
and Use synonyms
women
Use synonyms
spend
on various Wrong verb form
spent
activities
during the Use synonyms
day
in the UK.
Use synonyms
Overall
, it can be seen from the table that Linking Words
men
and Use synonyms
women
spend most of their Use synonyms
time
in a Use synonyms
day
Use synonyms
for
sleep and leisure Change preposition
on
activities
. Use synonyms
Additionally
, Linking Words
men
spend more Use synonyms
time
in employment and study than Use synonyms
women
do in housework.
In detail, males spend most of their Use synonyms
time
, slightly over a third Use synonyms
from
24 Change preposition
of
hours
, for sleep. Use synonyms
This
Linking Words
followed
by leisure Add a missing verb
was followed
activities
and employment and study Use synonyms
time
for 5.25 and 3.45 Use synonyms
hours
, respectively. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
men
Use synonyms
consume
more than one hour a Verb problem
spend
day
Use synonyms
for
doing the housework, travelling, and eating and drinking. Meanwhile, the least amount of Change preposition
apply
time
that Use synonyms
men
spend are other Use synonyms
activities
.
As we can see, just like Use synonyms
men
, Use synonyms
women
use Use synonyms
the
most of their Correct article usage
apply
time
to sleep and leisure Use synonyms
activities
. Use synonyms
However
, Linking Words
women
Use synonyms
in
average spend Change preposition
on
their
three Correct pronoun usage
apply
hours
a Use synonyms
day
Use synonyms
for
doing housework which Change preposition
apply
more
than half times Add a missing verb
is more
than
Correct word choice
what
men
do. Use synonyms
Women
Use synonyms
also
spend their Linking Words
time
Use synonyms
for
resting, childcare, voluntary work and meetings, and taking personal care more than Change preposition
apply
men
.Use synonyms
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