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The chart and table below show customer satisfaction levels in the US with airlines and aspects of air travel in 1999, 2000 and 2007.

The chart and table below show customer satisfaction levels in the US with airlines and aspects of air travel in 1999, 2000 and 2007.
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The chart and table illustrate the rate of
passengers
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satisfaction
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 in different fields in 1999,2000 and 2007.
It is clear that
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 the number of satisfied people had an upward trend
whereas
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, dissatisfied persons showed a downward trend. All of the categories for
satisfaction
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 with specific aspects of the flying experience in Gullup had a rising method. Looking closely at the bar chart depicts that in the first
year
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year,
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 65% of passengers were satisfied
of
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with
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 airlines and the rate of dissatisfaction was 32%.
moreover
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, the ratio of the agreement in 2000 increased slightly to 69% which means a growth of 4%
while
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 disagreement nations declined minimally by 3%.
in
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 2007, the
satisfaction
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 of airlines rose to 72% and the dissatisfaction dipped marginally by 5%. Focusing on the contentment of flight
attenders
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attendants
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 courtesy grew by 4% in eight years. The
satisfaction
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 of gate agents varied between 87% and 89%
in
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at
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 the same time. It is noticeable,
agreement
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that agreement
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 about
price
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the price
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 of
ticket
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tickets
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 surged considerably from 45% to 65%. Between 1999 and 2000, the amount of
schedules
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schedule
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satisfaction
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 climbed from 75% to 79% moderately and maintained the same level
to
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until
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 2007.
In addition
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, about the comfort of
seats
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seats,
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 only 2007 had 47%
of
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apply
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satisfaction
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 and two other years did not have any evaluation.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words satisfaction with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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