It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

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history, Raising children has been one of the most important challenges of every human’s life. One controversial

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child is a good or bad thing. There are two types of punishments: Physical and mental. Not only do some proponents advocate

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the opponents take a reverse side. On one hand, the adherents argue that both types of punishments mentioned before are necessary because of how tough the world is,

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lot of parents want their sons and daughters to always be ready and prepared for the cruel society. Another justification is an absolute need to remember and never do inappropriate and dangerous behaviour again and again so the belief is to punish them to remember and record in their brain.

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among our loved ones,

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in kids the act of bullying can be seen often.

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, it is wise to explore the mental punishments are extremely serious. Psychology research has

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that the majority of personality disorders

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are a result of actions like showing angriness, talking to

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with disrespect, scaring about living alone, etc.

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thing to kids are out-to-date and there are new methods

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good behaviour and of course, you can always ask your friends, family, and teachers to guide, help and give another conversation to your children.