The line graph shows the recycling rate of household in three different countries between 2005 and 2015.

The line graph shows the recycling rate of household in three different countries between 2005 and 2015.
The line chart illustrates the recycled waste ratio of families in three
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countries (UK, France and Germany) from 2005 to 2015.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the United Kingdom had the highest percentage of recycled items at 60%
at the end
of the period, meanwhile, Germany comes in second place at about 60% . From what is shown by the data, both
Britain
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and German household
rate
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of recycled trash
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less than 50% at the beginning of the period, roughly 20% and 35% respectively,
then
started to rise significantly throughout the years. In 2011, Great Britain and
Federal
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Republic of Germany
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French
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Republic ratio,and
finaly
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finally
arrived at
nearly
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similar rate at 60% after ten years in 2015. In terms of 2005, 50% of France houses were recycling their garbage,
then
the number started to decline gradually till it reached approximately one-third per cent in 2013,
that
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started to rise slowly and ended at 40%.
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