You will be celebrating your son’s 8th birthday next week. You want to invite one of your colleagues to attend the birthday party. Write an invitation letter to this college. In your letter, invite your colleague to your son’s birthday party give details of the party and its date and time say how happy you and your family would be to have him/her at the party

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Dear Mr.

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letter finds you in good condition and you are doing great there. I am writing

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latter

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letter

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to inform you that I will conduct my son's

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birthday

party.

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letter

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I am going to invite you to attend

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invite all of our colleagues to come to

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, it will be

amazing

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moment if all of

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guest

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could

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come.

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event

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will

be held on

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June 2024, at Rasuna Garden

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Restaurant

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located opposite the bank

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of indonesia

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indonesia

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esay

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easy

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this

place

due to

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very

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famous

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venue

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city. later we can enjoy live music and eat great meals and drinks, and we can watch some

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dance because my son really

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boyband

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. I am really happy if you can attend

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party, we can create stunning

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there, ocean thanks for your nice attention. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best regrad, Mr.Dixhi

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typographical and numerical accuracy

Ensure correct date format and proofread for typos like 'latter' instead of 'letter', 'birtday' instead of 'birthday', and numerical inconsistencies like '22th' which should be '22nd'.

detail clarity

Clarify details about the birthday party more systematically. Mentioning the entertainment and food is great, but including start or end times could be helpful for planning purposes.

personal touch

Including a personal message or a specific reason why their presence is valued would make the invitation feel more personal and heartfelt.

warmth and inclusivity

The invitation is warm and clearly expresses a desire for the colleague's presence at the party, highlighting the importance of their attendance to you and your family.

event details clarity

Good job on providing the venue address and describing what will happen at the party, which helps in setting expectations for the invited.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
26Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

167 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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